Feedback:
To do:
- Set out project description for each project into the brief outcomes and objectives. To show what the intent was.
- Also summarise the client in a sentence e.g. who are The Clothing Lounge
- Avoid repeating the same imagery are there any different images?
- Show other deliverables for Bangor Optometrists branding
- Check name of Colgate URL and other URL's
- Add other images to show editorial work, for Aureliana lookbook
- Add more images to Siria Janis branding.
To summarise...
I was pleasantly surprised by the very positive in depth feedback from Design Bridge Designer Hamish. Suggestions for improvements generally involved refining the copy write to make the brief and client clearer. Other design suggestions generally to contain more or other images. Feedback on the work itself I presented was all positive. This feedback has enabled to refine my portfolio reflective of industry advice. I also found engaging with Design Bridge a positive experience and this type of positive engagement I hope to find in the studio I work for in the future.
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