- Nice simple and effective structure and great consistency in your copywriting.
- Look carefully at the lead images you select at the top of each project page. In some cases the auto cropping works, in others it could be better.
- The simplest solution here would be to find out the image dimensions and make images for each project that can really make that full width hero spot work for you well.
- The Bangor Optometrists one is a good example, it’s way too tight at the sides. Because it’s on the same colour background as the rest of the page, if you made the logo smaller within that jpg, it would look beautifully centred as a lead image.
- Please add a mailto: link to your email. Nice to see lots of work up on here.
Alec
To Summarise...
Feedback received was positive and highlighted the effective structure and good copywriting across multiple projects. Visually the website fits with personal branding by being nice and simple. However, visually some image headers auto cropping does not work so shrinking the image and header size may work better for some pages and further development. Feedback also highlighted the links already attached to the site worked well but to perhaps at an email header link as well as LinkedIn and both Instagram accounts. Based on this feedback I was able to make my website more accessible through a range of useful header contact links as well as a contact me form. Navigation also makes the website accessible through headers for each project and a clear well structured format. Visually adjusting the images to an appropriate scale size also worked to enhance accessibility.
Developments based on feedback
- Header images and sizes rescaled appropriately
- Added a mail to email link adding relevant contact information
- Bangor optometrists header image altered so there is no need for auto cropping.
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