Feedback based on Brief and Practical Work
Should incorporate the dogs as well as women in order to visualise the campaigns celebration of both dogs and women.
- Do the connotations work or are associations better linked e.g. swim like a fish
I have taken this feedback on board however, the connotations do work as they link the campaign to inspiration gathered from Always Like a Girl Campaign.
- Reflect on my view is 'femvertising' positive?
'Femvertising' is a bit fake and controversial as although it aims to stand as an alternative form of advertising the end goal is still the same and the main purpose of an advertisement is to sell.
- Good - displays the message you're trying to visualise, feminism is a commodity.
Essay - Critical Writing Review
I got Poppy to review the first half of my first-essay draft to give me constructive criticism for further development of the next draft.
- Define commodification more obviously in introduction?
I agree with this feedback as commodification is the main topic discussed I perhaps should define this earlier on.
- Good the questions before case studies so it was clear what was being discussed.
This gave a clear structure when multiple examples or case studies are being discussed.
- Good triangulation - references gathered from different sources.
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