- Consider is language far enough and could this be further manipulated
- For further development consider how this could appeal to transgender audiences - possibly through imagery
- Could type be more manipulative by replacing 'got it' with 'need it'.
- How can you make it slightly more manipulative
- Look into John Berger ways of seeing, chapter 4 on women
- Could imagery show a transgender woman
- Reflective trope through slogan and visualisation
- Could women be shown in are more open context within the imagery - perhaps with men
- Refine the language or imagery to be more manipulative
- Good narrative
- Strong concept
Based on this feedback I will further refine the language within the content to be slightly less subtle and more manipulative. However feedback received was mainly positive and the outcome itself could just be tweaked slightly to better inform the context behind the practical. Positive feedback highlighted that the outcome itself was well executed.
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